Third Draft—Persuasive Letter to Class .

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Dear Class,

KABOOOOM! People dying. Children screaming. That’s what’s happens when a bomb hits during a war. I think we should focus on world peace for these reasons.
World peace solves all the stuff that’s on the sheet except hunger and cancer. World peace would save a lot of lives including animal lives where the bombs go off. If there’s world peace people might focus on more important stuff like hunger and cancer. World peace would help animals. World peace would help the recession because we wouldn’t spend so much money on wars. We spend three billion dollars on the Iraq war every year.
I feel both world peace and preventing animal cruelty are equally important. If we work on world peace, we can help with animal cruelty, too.