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Dear class,
I think that we should work on world peace. My grandpa was in the military. He was sent to war many times, and nearly died. He even had a wife and two children and he was not there lots of times to support his family through hard times. That is not peaceful.
If we were to work on world peace, lots more people in the wars could go home to celebrate holidays. Also, lots more lives would be saved as far as hunger, becuase the world is still not very peaceful with people on the streets begging for food. Animal creulty is not making the world peaceful ethier, or hunger, war and any of the other stuff on the chart. My opinion is that we should all live a good life.
I think we should have a peaceful world, not a fighting, starving cruel world. Please let it happen.