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Dear Class,



When I was five, my mother was brushing my hair and some of my hair fell out. So she called the hospital. After several tests, I was diagnosed with kidney cancer.
I had to have surgery to remove one of my kidneys. had to stay in the hospital for one whole month .I remember the nurses had to stick needles in the back of my wrists so that I could be hooked up to tubes. They put sticky things all over my chest that were connected to a machines. My dad brought me coloring books.When it was my birthday,they put me in a little red wagon and took me to the playroom . Then I had to get scans, even thought it was my birthday. They gave my birthday cake right in the came room. I think the class should workon cancer for the following reason


I think that the class should talk about cancer because it hard for people to live with it for (their) whole lives. Some kids are diagnosed with breast cancer, colon cancer, lung cancer and prostate cancer . These kids are so scared right now. There are over 48,000 people dying every year from cancer in the world. It also kills kids that are diagnosed with it because some can’t get help. Some kid's parents don’t have money to pay for the treatments. When I had cancer, I had to get left back in kindergarten because I was out of school for 3 months.
I think that cancer is the most important thing for the class to work on because I had it and they said I could die from it.

Sincerely,
Ma’Kayla Harrison






























Third Draft Ma’Kayla Harrison

Dear Class,
When I was five my mother was brushing my hair and some came out my head. So she called hospital. I was diagnosed with kidney cancer. I had surgery to remove one of my kidneys. I had to stay in the hospital for a month. I remember the nurses had to stick needles in the back of my wrists so that I could be hooked up to tubes. They put sticky things all over my chest that were connected to machines. My dad and his brothers came every day to see me. My dad brought me coloring books. When it was my birthday, they put me in a little red wagon and took me to the playroom. Then I had to get scans, even thought it was my birthday. They gave my my birthday cake right in the came room. I think the class should work on cancer for the following reasons.

I think that the class sould talk about cancer because it is hard for people to live with for their whole lives. Some kids that are diagnosed with cancer as so scared right now. There are over 48,000 people dying every year from cancer in the world. It also kills kids that are diagnosed with it because they can’t get help. Some kids parents don’t have money to pay. When I had cancer I had to get left back in kindergarten because I was out of school for 3 months.
I think that cancer is the most important thing for the class to work on because I had it and they said I could die from it.

Sincerely,
Ma’Kayla Harrison